Shouldn't the top left say
"IdyllicStory v83
Join us now."
Because right now, it says
"IdyllicStory
Join us now v83"
I like the colours, except in the top-right corner.
The pink/red and light-blue just looks kind of awkward.
I think the three things in the middle, instead of saying "Web Login, Client Login, and Download Java" should say something like "Forums, Downloads, and Voting", because I think that those are three of the most important things to make very apparent to viewers.
The boxes at the bottom seem too big..
Maybe you could add something as the background, maybe just a few screenshots of the community, the staff members, or something..